Original Song by Ubay " Tersipu "

HELLO my all my friends
this is my original song by me call tersipu,
i think, my original song is good to me
and i like the tune,

but i think my tune is like an old song genre
because i like the old song too. i very like it.
i find my chord just like the water that
fall from the mountain.

actually i really need your opinion about
my song, if you like it please comment
and dont forget to vote it.