The Ocean's Bounty - ThreeSpeak Poetry Reading

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    raj808

    Published on Nov 23, 2023
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    The salt air kissed my face,
    the breath of the sea
    thrown up by
    the lap of the waves.

    The boat sailed on
    as I watched the horizon.

    Day waning, the sun burned low,
    the afternoon sweltered aglow.

    I scanned the water
    looking for telltale lines
    of white, the sign of the reef.

    Relief, pearly brine on port side,
    I swung the tiller and set my sights
    on that salty singing maelstrom.

    As the anchor descended
    I stared through azure aqua,
    once it bit, grabbing my spear gun
    I dropped silent into the blue.

    I placed my face in the water,
    lifted my head, then counted...
    one, two, three deep breaths,
    calm like water in the bay
    at the end of the day.

    I strapped my goggles on
    and took the plunge.

    Beaked parrot fish sailed by
    as I sank slowly like a stone.
    Mirror-scaled Jacks
    hugged reef wall drop-off,
    moray smiled gaping gap-toothed
    grins from cracks in the corral.

    I set off into the turquoises sheen,
    sailing through this garden
    of bright corral cauldrons
    and soft coral trees.
    Hunting in the drift
    of tidal memories.

    Poetry is © raj808, all rights reserved.

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    The Breath of the Sea is a poem which employs various free-verse poetic techniques such as in-line rhymes, alliteration, assonance and experimentation with language/grammar.

    It is also a persona poem, a type of poetry where you take on the mind-set of another person, or even as some poets have attempted an object.

    In the case of 'The Breath of the Sea' it is inspired by my own scuba diving adventures, knowledge and love of tropical reefs. I have also been spearfishing in Belize, a somewhat dangerous undertaking as the local bull sharks are known for stealing spear fishers catches.

    Although this didn't happen to me, I was told “just give up the fish and the shark will leave you alone” 🦈😂

    These experiences have gifted me the memories to write this poem from the perspective one of the many tribes of South East Asian sea gypsies, some of whom subsists by free diving on reefs and spear fishing for their daily meals.

    Thanks for reading 😉 🌿


    CC license Media used:

    **Thumbnail: **
    https://pixabay.com/illustrations/ai-generated-reef-fish-ocean-sea-8328042/
    **Video: **
    Video by Alexander Bobrov: https://www.pexels.com/video/drone-tracking-of-a-wooden-motor-boat-used-for-fishing-3277598/
    Video by Adrien JACTA: https://www.pexels.com/video/school-of-fish-in-the-deep-blue-sea-5358755/
    Video by Vladimir Koshenkov: https://www.pexels.com/video/man-snorkeling-underwater-4612115/
    Video by Tom Fisk: https://www.pexels.com/video/variety-of-fishes-under-the-deep-ocea-1457037/
    Video by Gram Film: https://www.pexels.com/video/dropping-an-anchor-at-sea-2850617/
    Video by Tom Fisk: https://www.pexels.com/video/fish-and-turtle-under-the-sea-1151962/
    Music:

    'Filaments' by Scott Buckley is under a Creative Commons license Attribution 3.0 Shared by BreakingCopyright — Royalty Free Music


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    If you would like to read the fiction I have published on hive, I've published 83 short stories on the blockchain catalogued in my Hive Book Store.

    If you have enjoyed this post you can check out my other work on my homepage @raj808.

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