@verbal-d: @singleboiy It's good to see more rappers in the Vibes Web3 Music Competition This was a good effort, solid entry My critique to you would be to have better breath control And to rap with more conviction, energy and passion When rappers rap, they have to rap with believability Your energy could be much higher and the tone is a bit monotone throughout most of the song The beat could also be a bit louder You gotta emphasize and style on certain parts of the song Switch it up, to keep things interesting for the listener and for the dynamic of the song presentation Once you truly start to feel the song and be more animated and comfortable with the song The delivery, performance, rhythm and tone all fall together Hope this feedback helps you for your future entries Looking forward to seeing you improve. @Verbal D Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter& Official Vibes Judge