What Goes Up...

@futuremind: This entire concept is very thought provoking and intriguing @litguru, and has really put me on some serious planes of thought lol. Nicely written! It appears as though that plane is defying physics in its upward trajectory, and with a touch of zero gravity at its peak ;D

@seki1: That was a neat plane trick. I feel queasy just watching it, although I'll want to experience it 😂😂😂

@erh.germany: Holy smoke! What a devil of a flyer. I don't know whether I find it brave or foolhardy, but apparently the pilot knows the behaviour of his machine. Incredible performance! I can only sympathise too well with the fact that your heart sank when you had your own experience of the same kind. Even on flights where the large passenger planes suddenly plummet downwards, you can recognise what you are describing. A long time ago, when I was still working in the PR industry, there was a competition to win a parabolic flight (the winners had previously completed a so called cosmonaut training programme and had flown to Russia/Baikonur). Those were the days! “Want me to do it again?” “No man, that’s good.” We both told him. LoL :D Hope your second one isn't still running around somewhere. HaHa!

@theinkwell: Great use of dialogue here. You interpose the dialogue with exposition so that both add to the dynamics of the piece. As you share the experience with readers, most will be happy they were not on that plane. Thank you for sharing this aerial adventure with us, @litguru

@reblogme: The opening dialogue immediately pulls the reader in and creates a sense of mystery. "You can float in the plane" is an intriguing hook that makes the reader want to find out more. Well done on the engaging opening line. You do a good job setting the context at the beginning explaining how you and your friends had lost touch after high school but later reconnected when you learned Ron had become a pilot. This backstory helps ground the story. Nice Job!

@phyna: This short piece is amazing! I would totally be scared too if I were in your shoes 😂. It's really great to have a friend like Ron. He sounds like an adventurous person.

@teknon: I don't know why I'm laughing but I know this feeling even though it's quite different from what it's in the video. I would scream my lungs out if any pilot tried that with me on the plane. It scares me.

@amiableamara: Ohh, I will fear for my life too was I to be in your position. Nice one dear

@ladymercy: If I am I that situation, so much fear resonating deep within

@biyimi: Everything seems to be in cycle and happens to everyone

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