Original Song - Tittle : Hell Fire by ubay

Hello All Hivers, how are you today
i hope you fine, i just make a english song
today, i dont know my writting is good
or not, but i am sure i still need some advice
to make my lyric good on this

i feel like i need to make a english song
and i just imagine immidately what
i imagine is some person that is need help
so i try to make a song with this lyric

Something in your eyes
Let me see closely
There is a lonely
Your heart is talking now.
Let me hear closely
The Scream of desperate
The Scream of hell fire
Your soul is tremble now
Let me feel deeply
You want to go with me
Coz iam gonna make you happy

Yea iam happy, coz you take me
Where you gonna bring me
Why i am so happy
The spirit of hell burn me

what do you think guys, if you like it
please like it and comment