My Thoughts Live (and recorded version)

This is my live (first take) version of my song 'My Thoughts'

Recorded using M-Audio M-Track Duo into videopad (video editor software)

Here is a version that has been put through Logic on an apple mac (thanks to @purplesinger)

https://youtu.be/q3lSdmfg6B8

You can straight away see the difference, all beit i only did one take for the live version, the produced version is absalutely fantastic in comparrison.

I tend to not be a perfectionist when it comes to recording, but i am slowly getting into it, I have just purchased Ableton Live 11.

Lyrics to the song:

Lyrics:

Oh, Won't you - Stay Home tonight
Oh, Don't you - Leave Home
Oh, Won't you - Please, hold me, tight

And the visions i am seeing, have me believing
In a place long forgotten, this life is all but rotten
And the blue sky, and the blue sky
The moon is still reflecting, the light from yesterday
Am i still protecting a dream, long flown away
Oh

Oh, Won't you - Lay with me, tonight
Oh, Don't you - Say, you have to leave
Oh, Won't you - Lie to me and stay

All these places i have been, my soul is full of sin
I'm not questioning anything you've done to me
But i'm sure i was fine before i walked through your door

Oh, Won't you - Take me home
Oh, Don't you - Take a part of me
Oh, Won't you - Leave me whole

And the man in the chair, the hands in the air
My thoughts are crumbling away, i drift and say
I won't let you down
Oh

Add: The thumbnail picture is one i painted.