SMOKE - A short film Noir (A two man production that failed)

We created this for college, we got so carried away with it that we pied the brief, did none of the paperwork and ultimately failed. However the film is excellent in my absurd opinion haha. Let me know what you think. It was made entirely by myself (playing the writer) and Nicky (playing Smoke Rivers), we drafted in Matt to play Slater. There are multiple references and easter eggs in the dialogue, Id love to know if you spot them. Also we are all raving Scotsman so excuse the accents, the film is actually just an Ode to film noir, a bit of a spoof.

Oh and btw this is my maiden post here, youtube has fucked me over for about 10 years now so I've divorced them, wish me luck.