Ciudad Sencilla - *"Canción inédita"* //Simple City - *"Unreleased song"*

6

  • 452
  • 0
  • 39.700
  • Reply

  • Open in the desktop app ADD TO PLAYLIST

    edwardpianista

    Published on Nov 28, 2021
    About :

    Bendiciones a toda la comunidad de Hive. Quedé impresionado con todo el apoyo que conseguí con mi última publicación después de tanto tiempo, de antemano gracias y espero conseguir más apoyo, daré lo mejor de mí para realizar un contenido agradable para todos.

    Hoy decidí mostrarle un material inédito que fue producto de un taller de composición de canciones que hice hace unos meses. Tuve demasiadas dudas en hacerlo, ya que aunque estoy dedicado a la composición musical, eso no implica la labor poética, ya que me he dedicado a lo instrumental, además, no me dedico al canto (aunque me gusta), estoy dedicado es a la ejecución del piano, sin embargo el resultado de este taller fue bastante satisfactorio, por lo que me atreví a publicarle mi última composición de dicho taller.

    El taller se dividió en dos partes, la composición de cuartetas y redondillas, y luego la parte musical, que es lo melódico y armónico. El proceso creativo de los poemas, fue divertido, nos pidieron hacer dos listas una de sustantivos y otra de abverbios; estos fueron colocados en dos bolsas y cada uno sacabamos un sustantivo y un abverbio que servirían de inspiración para realizar nuestra composición. En mi caso me tocó el sustantivo ciudad y el abverbio sencillo, es decir ciudad sencilla. Fue un reto, sin embargo hice una historia de un niño enamorado de su maestra, a quien le pidieron como tarea hacer una ciudad sencilla de maqueta. Espero les guste.

    CORO
    Haz una ciudad sencilla
    Que no importe si es pequeña
    Realízala con arcilla
    Será una hermosa maqueta

    ESTROFA 1
    Me mandaste esa tarea
    Antes de salir de clases
    Y me fui para mi aldea
    Con la mente en otra parte
    Solo pensaba en amarte
    Y mostrar lo que hay en mí
    Me puse hacerte un detalle
    Para que dijeras sí

    ESTROFA 2
    Te compuse una canción
    Para mí la más hermosa
    Expresándote mi amor
    Pero fue muy poca cosa
    Es que solo me distraje
    No hice caso a tu llamado
    Yo pensando en conquistarte
    No llevé lo encomendado

    ESTROFA 3*
    Me rompiste el corazón
    Cuando tú me reprobaste
    Es que no era una canción
    ¿la maqueta? ¿la dejaste?
    Sé que es tarde pa´ entregarla
    Conseguí un poco de arcilla
    Ahora quiero enamorarla
    Con mi maqueta sencilla

    Blessings to the entire Hive community. I was impressed with all the support I got with my last post after such a long time, thank you in advance and I hope to get more support, I will do my best to make content enjoyable for everyone.

    Today I decided to show him some unpublished material that was the product of a songwriting workshop I did a few months ago. I had too many doubts in doing it, since although I am dedicated to musical composition, that does not imply poetic work, since I have dedicated myself to the instrumental, in addition, I do not dedicate myself to singing * (although I like it) *, I am dedicated is to playing the piano, however the result of this workshop was quite satisfactory, so I dared to publish my latest composition from that workshop.

    The workshop was divided into two parts, the composition of quatrains and redondillas, and then the musical part, which is the melodic and harmonic. The creative process of the poems was fun, they asked us to make two lists, one of nouns and the other of abverbs; These were placed in two bags and each one of us took out a noun and an abverb that would serve as inspiration for our composition. In my case I got the noun * city * and the abverb * simple *, that is * simple city *. It was a challenge, however I did a story about a boy in love with his teacher, who was asked as a task to make a simple model city. I hope you like it.

    ** CHORUS **
    Make a simple city
    That it does not matter if it is small
    Make it with clay
    It will be a beautiful mockup

    ** STROPH 1 **
    You sent me that task
    Before leaving classes
    And I went to my village
    With my mind elsewhere
    I only thought of loving you
    And show what's in me
    I made you a detail
    For you to say yes

    ** STROPH 2 **
    I wrote you a song
    For me the most beautiful
    Expressing my love to you
    But it was very little
    Is that I just got distracted
    I did not heed your call
    I thinking of conquering you
    I did not take what was entrusted

    • STROPH 3 **
      You broke my heart
      When you failed me
      It was not a song
      The mockup? Did you leave her?
      I know it's too late to deliver it
      I got some clay
      Now I want to make her fall in love
      With my simple mockup

    Tags :

    spanish cervantes music creativecoin soundmusic palnet mih livemusic

    Woo! This creator can upvote comments using 3speak's stake today because they are a top performing creator! Leave a quality comment relating to their content and you could receive an upvote worth at least a dollar.

    Their limit for today is $0!
    Comments:
    Time until edwardpianista can give away $0 to their commenters.
    0 Days 0 Hours 0 Minutes 0 Seconds
    Reply:

    To comment on this video please connect a HIVE account to your profile: Connect HIVE Account

    02:42
    17 views a year ago $

    More Videos

    00:19
    4 views a year ago $
    03:23
    14 views a year ago $
    04:53
    47 views 8 months ago $
    02:57
    8 views a year ago $